Tim....lookin good....your plan seems very logical.... all the criteria appears to be met, clear entry, transition, sub-spaces.... nice job.. also, it is a very formal solution.... has a classical look to it....
Tim, I agree with Peter’s comments. Clear composition; all required parts seem to be there. However, I’m not sure if we are seeing the same thing. Please add the few labels to indicate where you intended for the different spaces / transitions to occur. You have many leading and gradual transitions. An abrupt transition could be pronounced stronger
I am a student at the Boston Architectural College enrolled in the Distance Masters of Architecture Program. I live and work in Westerville, Ohio. I am happily married to my wife Cindy and have two children, Nathan and Jessica. I work within a family architectural practice, Shremshock Architects, Inc.
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Tim....lookin good....your plan seems very logical.... all the criteria appears to be met, clear entry, transition, sub-spaces.... nice job.. also, it is a very formal solution.... has a classical look to it....
Tim,
I agree with Peter’s comments. Clear composition; all required parts seem to be there.
However, I’m not sure if we are seeing the same thing. Please add the few labels to indicate where you intended for the different spaces / transitions to occur.
You have many leading and gradual transitions. An abrupt transition could be pronounced stronger
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